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  • TERMPAPER

    5pagesdoublespaced Atleast4acceptablereferences ANYOCEANRELATEDTOPIC!!!!!

    http://www.marinelifephotography.com/fishes/angelfishes/centropyge-potteri.htm

    Potter'sAngelfishCentropyge potteri

  • TERMPAPER

    TOPICdueweekofFebruary13th inlab SUBMITTOMEBYEMAILBEFORELABTHATDAY ThesisstatementandATLEAST3HIGHLEVEL REFERENCES

    ROUGHDRAFTdueweekofMarch13thinlabanddigitalcopybyemail FINALDRAFTdueandPRESENTATIONweekofApril24th inlabanddigitalcopybyemail

    http://www.marinelifephotography.com/fishes/blennies/entomacrodus-marmoratus.htm

    MarbledBlennyEntomacrodus marmoratus

  • TERMPAPER

    Demonstratethatyoucan: Selecttrustworthysources Buildanargument/takeastanceonatopic Writeaproperlyformattedpaperwith: PROPERCITATIONS CORRECTGRAMMAR FORMALLANGUAGE GOODORGANIZATION

    http://hawaiinaturejournal.weebly.com/uploads/2/0/8/3/20833844/3365227_orig.jpg

    ZebraBlennyIstiblennius zebraPAOO

  • TERMPAPER: GENERALSTRUCTURE

    Startwithanoutline:

    IncludeyourName&Date PaperTitle Introduction SupportingParagraphs Concludingstatement References

    http://www.marinelifephotography.com/marine/echinoderms/urchins/colobocentrotus-atratus.htm

    HelmeturchinColobocentrotus atratus

  • TERMPAPER: INTRODUCTION

    Introducethemaintopic Backgroundaboutthetopic Thesisstatement Whatareyouarguing?Orwhatisyourquestion?

    Thisisthelastsentenceofyourintroduction

    *Theintroductionsetsupthesupportingparagraphs

  • TERMPAPER: SUPPORTINGPARAGRAPHS

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    ...

    Supportingparagraphs(3+) Startwithatopicsentencethatsummarizeswhatthatparagraphwillbeaboutandconnectsittothethesis Focusedonatopicsurroundingyourmaintopic:forexampleifyourpaperisaboutopenoceanfishfarms: Whatdotheydointhesefarms? Whyarefishfarmsimportant? Wheredoesfishfarmingoccur? Whatistheproblemwithwhattheydo?

  • TERMPAPER: CONCLUDINGPARAGRAPH Refreshthereaderonyourmainpointsandthesis(firstsentenceofconclusionisyourthesisstatement) Whatarethetake-aways Whataretheimplicationsforthefuture ConcludingSentence e.g.Fishfarmingclearlyisayoungbusinessandhasmuchneedforimprovement,butisanecessarypracticeforthefutureproteinneedsoftheworld.

  • TERMPAPER: GENERALSTRUCTURE

    Startwithanoutline: IncludeyourName&Date PaperTitle Introduction SupportingParagraphs Concludingstatement References in-textcitationsandreferenceslist(APAstyle)

    http://www.marinelifephotography.com/marine/echinoderms/urchins/colobocentrotus-atratus.htm

    HelmeturchinColobocentrotus atratus

  • TERMPAPER- WHERETOFINDINFORMATION UNACCEPTABLEReferences:

    Wikipedia,NationalGeographic,WorldWildlifeFund,Youtube,SaveTheWhales.org,FoxNewsorMSNBC(oranynightlynewstype),PersonalBlogsites

    ACCEPTABLEReferences(3levels): Lowlevel:Scienceoreducationalwebsitesthatcitetheprimaryliterature(=ScientificJournalArticles) e.g.ScienceDaily,anything.edu

    Midlevel:GovernmentRecordsandWebsites(NOAA.gov,EPA.gov,NASA.gov,other .gov)

    Highlevel:ScientificJournals,PublishedTextbooks,ConferenceProceedings(atleast3ofthe4)

    http://www.marinelifephotography.com/fishes/filefishes/pervagor-spilosoma.htm

    FantailedFilefishPervagor spilosoma''ili 'uwi 'uwi

  • WHATISASCIENTIFICJOURNALARTICLE?

    1. Anewcontributiontoknowledgethatascientistworkedveryhardtoproduceandsharewiththeworld

    2. ORareview-synthesisofexistingknowledgeonatopic similartoyourpaper

    Notallofourworkgetspublished whatdoesgetpublishedisusuallyPeer-reviewed

    http://www.marinelifephotography.com/fishes/filefishes/pervagor-spilosoma.htm

    SeaslugCaloria sp.

  • HOWTOFINDANACCEPTABLEREFERENCE? CanSTART withWikipediaorGooglesearchtofindjournalarticles UseGoogleScholarorWebofScience(throughUHMlibrary) Keywordsareimportant!Cangetyouverydifferentresults. Broadv.s.Specific:Chemicals,fish,waterV.S.Mercury,tuna,ocean

    Howtoknowifitisacceptable... The4referencesmustatleastcitetheprimaryliteratureORbeagovernmentor.edu website .gov websitesdontoftenmaketheirsourcesclearbutinformationisprovidedbyexpertsinthefield

  • HOWNOTTOPLAGIARIZEAREFERENCE ExamplePapertopic:Mercuryinmarinefoodwebs Paragraph1topic:Backgroundinformation Exampleresource:(1)http://oehha.ca.gov/fish/hg/index.html Mercuryisanaturalelementfoundinrocks,coal,andsoil(1).

    Donotcopyandpaste!Evenifyouthinkthatsthebestwaytosayit. 5wordsinarowthatareidenticalistechnicallyplagiarism.SO: Thinkaboutwhatyouaretryingtosayandhowyouwouldtalkaboutit,thenrewriteitinyourownwords

    Not-plagiarizing:Mercurynaturallyoccursinrocks,soilandcoal(1)anditgetsintothecoastaloceanprimarilythroughfreshwaterrunofffromland(2)....

  • MICHELLEOBAMA'SSPEECH(2008)'AndBarackandIwereraisedwithsomanyofthesamevalues:thatyouworkhardforwhatyouwantinlife;thatyourwordisyourbondandyoudowhatyousay you'regoingtodo;thatyoutreatpeoplewithdignityandrespect,evenifyoudon'tknowthem,andevenifyoudon'tagreewiththem.'AndBarackandIsetouttobuildlivesguidedbythesevalues,andpassthemontothenextgeneration.'Becausewewantourchildren andallchildreninthisnation toknowthattheonlylimittotheheightofyourachievementsisthereachofyourdreamsandyourwillingnesstoworkforthem.'

    Readmore:http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-3699830/Trump-employee-admits-plagiarized-Michelle-Obama-Melania-s-speech-feels-terrible-chaos-Donald-REFUSED-accept-resignation.html#ixzz4I2bpZsUl

    MELANIATRUMP'SSPEECH(2016)'Myparentsimpressedonmethevaluesthatyouworkhardforwhatyouwantinlife.'Thatyourwordisyourbondandyoudowhatyousayandkeepyourpromise,thatyoutreatpeoplewithrespect.Theytaughtandshowedmevaluesandmoralsintheirdailylives.'ThatisalessonthatIcontinuetopassalongtoourson.Andweneedtopassthoselessonsontothemanygenerationstofollow. Becausewewantourchildreninthisnationtoknowthattheonlylimittoyourachievementsisthestrengthofyourdreamsandyourwillingnesstoworkforthem.'

  • RESOURCESFORYOU NeverwrittenaResearchPaperbefore? PurdueUniversityOnlineWritingLab:Writingaresearchpaper

    UHManoaLibraries,librarywebsite HamiltonLibrary SinclairLibrary

    TheWritingCenter offerswritingconsultationsfreeofcharge Open9-5daily PurpleGorgonian

    Eugorgia rubens

    http://www.marinelifephotography.com/marine/cnidaria/eugorgia-rubens.htm